Sunday, January 8, 2012

Any suggestions on making my story have a stronger ending?

small conflict with the mlb officer maybe some violence jst a little and make him coach but then demoted to istant coach but then shows the team even though hes is demoted he will still work hard and the players demand he be moved back up to head coach they succed and he fulfills his promise to a now accepting hilary

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